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Well just so you lovely readers know... Sasuke might be a little OOC....

I'm not sure how this will turn out...

so um yeah... ENJOY!!~ :squee:

Oh please comment if there are any spelling mistakes or if you wanna tell me your opinion of this!!


"(Name)-CHAN!!!!!" A voice yelled. You glance up from your book and notice your teammate Naruto running up to you.  You pull a strand of your (hair color) locks behind your ear. You smiled "H-hey N-Naruto." You stated. "Sakura and I were going to Ichiraku for ramen!! Wanna come??" He asked. "Sure." You replied. Naruto grinned. "Great!!" He said grabbing your hand and pulling you off the bench.

~.~ At Ichiraku ~.~

Naruto walks in and notices Sasuke with Sakura. You blushed brightly. "Who invited him??" Naruto asked. "I did." Sakura replied. Sakura looks at you. "Oh hey (Name)-san!" She said smiling. "H-hey Sa-Sakura.." You stuttered. Sakura glared at Naruto. "Did you sneak up on (Name)-san again??" Sakura asked. "NO!! I PROMISE SAKURA-CHAN!!" Naruto yelled. You chuckled. You took a seat between Sakura and Sasuke. "So (Name)-chan, how's your training going?? Did you master that jutsu??" She asked. You nodded. "Y-yeah I did.. I had a bit of Naruto's help.. I'm also having Kakashi-sensei train me with some other jutsu." You replied. "Oh that's great!!" She said smiling. Sasuke looked at you. "Which jutsu is he teaching you??" Sasuke asked. You looked over at Sasuke. "Chidori." You replied. "Really!?! Isn't that like a really advance jutsu??" Sakura asked. You point at Sasuke. "He learned it in a week.. And K-Kakashi-sensei says I could learn it in a w-week t-too..." You replied. A couple of seconds later Ayame came over to take your orders. "Two bowls of pork ramen!!" Naruto ordered for himself and you. "A bowl of Miso ramen." Sakura stated. "A bowl of pork ramen." Sasuke stated. Ayame nods and walks off. You felt a pair of eyes staring at you from your left. You turn slightly and your (eye color) orbs met a pair of onyx ones. "Yes S-Sasuke??" You asked. "I don't get you.." He stated. "Um I don't understand Sasuke." You stated. "You never fret over your hair, looks, or anything like most girls in this village." he replied. You blushed slightly. "I n-never really plan out my outfits and I just normally put my hair in a braid, so it's out of my w-way when I train." You said smiling. You could tell Sakura was glaring at your back with jealousy. You turn away from Sasuke when your bowls of ramen were placed in front in front of you. "Thanks for the food." You all said.

~.~ After Naruto finished his 16 bowls of ramen~.~

You sighed. "Thanks for paying for the food (Name)-chan!!" Naruto cheered hugging you. "Y-yeah y-your welcome.. But you owe me the money..." you stated. "Aww Don't be like that (Name)-chan!!" He whined. "Don't (Name)-Chan me... I do want my money back.." you replied. Naruto sighed and released the hug he had in. "You're mean (Name)-chan!!" He whined again. You giggled. "You two are weird...” Sakura giggled. You smiled. "Well without (Name)-chan and I, Yours and Sasuke's world would be filled with complete boringness!!!" Naruto cheered. "Boringness isn't a word you dobe.." Sasuke stated. "It a-actually is.. It’s a noun.." You muttered.

~.~ After dropping off Naruto and Sakura at home ~.~

The sun had finally started to set. You looked at Sasuke and smiled. "It's beautiful s-sun set.." You said smiling. "Why do you stutter??" Sasuke asked. You sighed. "I stutter because I get nervous sometimes and I'm seriously shy...." You exclaimed. "Why are you shy??" He asked. "It's just hard... Trying to make friends, I mean.. I don't wanna embarrass myself.." you whispered. He stopped walking and looked at you as you continued talking. "I just don't want to b-be teased for my s-soft voice...” You stated. Sasuke placed his hand on your shoulder. "Your voice isn't soft... It's actually really beautiful.." he said. You went red in the face. "S-seriously????" You asked. "Seriously." He replied. You smiled softly. "Thanks...” You replied hugging him. Sasuke's hand caressed your cheek. "Another thing that is different about you is that you don't wear any makeup." He said getting close to your face. Your eyes flashed silver as you started to hear Sasuke's thoughts. 'I love (Name) I think I'd give up my dream for revenge just to stay with her....' Sasuke glanced at you. "Are you okay (Name)??" he asked. You close your eyes. "Y-yeah." You said blushing. Sasuke looked at you a bit confused and unsure. "Are you sure?? Your face is red.. You sure you're not running a fever?" He asked. You giggled. "You sound like Naruto, when he sees Hinata-chan blushing." You stated. Sasuke smiled a rare smile. "You're a good friend, so I worry about you." He stated. "That's k-kind o-of you." You replied. The sun landed on your (hair color) locks. "The sun makes your hair look beautiful." Sasuke whispered. You blushed. "T-thank you S-Sasuke." You replied. You noticed your house. "Well it looks like we're almost towards your house." Sasuke said frowning. You let out sigh. "Y-yeah..." You mumbled. You both stop in front of you door. "(Name)-Chan... I Love you.." Sasuke stated grabbing your hand. "I l-love you t-too...” You whispered. He smiled and kissed your lips softly. He placed something in your hand closed your hand over it. "Bye my lovely (Name)-san.." He stated. You smiled and opened the door to your apartment. You felt a sigh of happiness leave your lips. "Best night ever.." You said flopping onto the couch. You unclench your hand and looked at the cute little pendent with a note attached to it. You looked at the note. '(Name) you have been driving me crazy all my life and I couldn't get you out of my head when we meet in the academy. I want you to be my girlfriend... (A/N: I know... COMPLETE OOC!!) Meet me at the waterfall after your training with Kakashi-sensei. -Sasuke. You blushed and placed the pendent on the table next to you. You smiled and fell asleep.

~~ Time Skip: After your training with Kakashi ~~

You sigh and lay back against the rocks by the waterfall. You played with the pendent and smiled. 'I'm really nervous' You sighed and placed your sore feet into the cold water. The (favorite color) crystal of the pendent glinted in the sun. "Oi (Name)-san!!" Sasuke said. "Ohayo!!" You stated. He smirked. "I see you're wearing the pendent.." He stated. "Y-yeah." You stated. "So is that a yes??" He asked. You stood up and walked over to him. "Hai." You stated. He smiled and kissed your forehead.


~The End~

I :heart: Sasuke but not in that crazy fangirl way... I'm annoyed with how Sakura is in the beginning of NARUTO, but now I think she's ok... :squee: I'm glad they put NARUTO back on T.V. SORRY FOR THE SHORTNESS!!!

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Fluffysunbunny1 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artist
Oh my gosh!! So cute!! *dies from kawaii overload*
Luetoomi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  New member Hobbyist Artist
This is so cuuuute§!!!!!!! please more!!!
lillylash1 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Professional Artist
so cute
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awwwww ( sees the OOC ) it's ok XD it's adorable anyways XD
KikoAkira Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lolao Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
There are 123 COMENTS but here I am being a
Rebel making it 124
SilverCryMeep Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
125 actually, ah! I mean 126!
CarmenBiat Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Artist
1000meredith Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is cute :D completly like me XD
kkpowercutie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Eliza1012 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Eat that Sakura
20pollyn Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love 
hailey3781 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
nice pic at the top lol nice fanfic ive read it before but i just had to read it again
RoyalDreamz Featured By Owner Edited Jul 25, 2014
Sasuke: I love you
Me: ... okay haha where's the camera? Is this a joke? Or are you intoxicated?
Sasuke: ... I'm serious...
Me: Okay, creepy guy checking me out... *runs*
AnnabelleRoseWolf Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
A..accually I b..belong s..Suske
krista937 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
that was so cute
HexedBeMySoul44 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sooo adorable 8-) (Cool) 
JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like you icon. Little chibi Ciel is so cute! ...... I just had a Lizzy moment, didn't I?
love-is-very-rare Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, yes you did.
JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HetaliaFerua Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! Love your icon btw  Sebastian Michaelis (Smily) [V2]  
SasuSakuForevera Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Dawww I loves it
NekoLoverNile Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student General Artist
That was really cute great job! :D
KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
One time I saw that Naruto was back on tv after all those years, but because of my family thinking it's 'evil' I couldn't watch it. And especially it was because of Orochimaru.. =.= Then after that, Naruto was never to be seen again on tv. I really need to check again...
FurryLovahRuby Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I feel sorry for you... my grandmother doesn't really care what I watch! I wish it was the same for you and your parents... p.s. its all orochimarus fault!
KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FurryLovahRuby Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HES SUCH A MEAN SNAKE-TEME! Jashin, please help her~?!
KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sukothedark Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OK first I love the fanfic <3. OK im not that far in Naruto and I already love (that's why I read the fanfics) To be truthful at first I was like Naruto your so amazing (I still think that) But know im a Sasuke fangirl (not the overly obsessive type) And right now I still kind of don't like Sakura (but I think I might later on) Anyways this was so amazing and I love it so much. Your epic. ^-^
XxBloodyStarzxX Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well I am glad you loved it~ Neko Emoji-16 (Blush) [V1] You're so nice~
sukothedark Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I just speak the truth.
watermuffintop Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: sips milk
Story : I love you  (sasuke)
Me : :).........wait what *chokes on milk 
flametheminx Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
I love play with fire LOL LOL 
Zanni-Zanna Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
cute~! I'm really shy myself so I relate to reader-chan :33 yay!!!!!
emogirrafe123 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
*rolls around everywhere squealing*
OkamiHiiro Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*rolls off of bed and rolls around on floor from cuteness*
CielaPhantomhive152 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Is your icon Ciel from Black Butler? Is it because you thought it was cute or do you just like him? If it's the second option, hello fellow Black Butler lover!
XxBloodyStarzxX Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
1. It is indeed Ciel.

2. A little bit of both

3. Hello!
JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
KAWAII! !!! <3 <3 <3 <3
Kawaii!I am a dummy! Love Meow :3 Giggle :happybounce: 
popstar27337 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
emoticon Smiley Cheerleader Commission - Clefairykid emote WOOT- Emoticon  * dies from cuteness*x_x --oO_O 
blacknightshade1205 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The kawaii ness will be my happy death
nek00taku Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Artist
hehehehe *shoots daggers back at Sakura* I've been practicing all day with a bitch I know
Sasukecool15 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
Very Cute Story. :)
XxBloodyStarzxX Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad you think so ^_^
Sasukecool15 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome?
Kidagakaush Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
cute story
xXDestinyStarXx Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
I thought exclaiming was yelling? o.o *thinks about it* Golly now I'm confuzzled
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